Ok..this was damn painful fr me to read.. u've done a bloody good job.. an amazing poemm .. very relatable.. amazing flow.. brilliantly penned.. ur amazing..

Keep it up

~Wake~

Its a well written poem with lots of courge... 5.5

Nazeer

Its like sweet then horrific! but a good write you could feel the emotion the flow is a little of but this was a good write

The flow of this poem is amazing I don’t know what to say you really are very talented.

Wow what a great poem I loved the ending but you should have made this poem longer it was too great to be so short ^^

Noellle

=] very good.

Very much stirring, let them flourish.. 5/5
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Nazeer

I really really liked that one. You could just feel all of the emotion coming out of it. Probably one of my favorite of yours :)

This poem is adorable!! I enjoyed it a lot, nice job. 5/5 . Check out some of my poems thanx =]!

I like it.
Nicely put. It's sad.
Thank you for commenting. :D
I'll try&see if I can add more to it.

Wow great poem! Very sad but I love it!

Lovely poem, very emotional, very good. 5/5

Excellent, really like this xx

Thank you for the comment on my poem...your a good writer as well, although i dont see how someone could not be good, so i dont think that was a very unique compliment...i'd say your poetry is intriguing, well done...

Leelee