I love the concept. It is without a single rhyme and it's still wonderful. Actually in a way it's kind of refreshing lol. I think you did a great job with this. 5/5

marcella

Good poem. It doesn't seem like you had writers block. ^_^. I liked the topic of decision and I believe that the decisions you make in your everyday life is extremely important. Everything you wrote in this poem was so true. Oh and outcome is one whole word not two.
Anyway, the flow of the poem was great and so was the rhyming.

Keep it up && Take Care.

-Shannon <3

For having writers block you did a great job! i think the poem is perfect just the way it is (great message by the way) 5/5 <33

Very interesting poem. It is original and you created great atmosphere. Last line destroys a flow but rest of this piece is excellent. It deserves 5/5, it is simple but powerful

This is a good poem
i think you could of done better
but well writers block can be y'know
sometimes lol
good job glad to of read it
enjoyed lots

Keenan

Good job! i hate having writers block but u seemed 2of got thru it wif sum nice wrk!

This is a nicely written poem. You picked a good topic, and every line was so very true. The decisions we make in every day life is our turn key; very important. The last line crunched the flow, but otherwise pretty fluid. Good job!

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

Excellent!

i can feel something is missing with this one, but however you did a good job, Great piece

keep it up!

Really great! loved it! nice flow!

It wasn't too bad.
Good topic and it was very true.
But i think there was something missing..
Probably because of writers block,
Nice attempt though.

Keep Smiling =)

It's pretty good....I couldn't really think of anything wrong. It appeals to logic more than emotion, but I dk, that's not a bad thing, just something I'm not too used to.

Aww where nice theme. Meaningful and makes the reader think, very nice work on that. And decisions are so important! Aww never know which one will be the right one till you have made it. nice how you pointed that out. It was wierd for me just to read poem with no emotions in it but refreshing so liked that too!
5/5! Keep it up!

Each choice can make a difference,
you never know the out come,
Always have to make a decision,
in order to move on.

wow, i loved those lines, very true and meaningful. you may have writers block but you still put out a good poem!! i love it great job!! 5/5

This is a good poem. You're right about decision working. The flow was a bit off, but it's still totally true. 4/5

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This Is A Really Good Poem!