Letter to Sir Gregory

by XXTruthSeekerXX   Aug 11, 2007


Letter to Sir Gregory

Have all but love; have none but love,
Drink to silence or drink to me.
I am your virtues; your weakened dreams,
Once upon the Greenland Seas.
Listen to me now dear lord--dear sir,
What gifts borne from my mother land
Do you so desire as to take a bride--me
As your guilty mortal brand?

In name only shall we say two words--
But let there be no bitterness,
You have your continueous green sums
And I, your home's new mistress.
One day you're see, you're not so gallant--
If one unbearing touch seize fright,
The moment you know I have spoken of love--
Once upon a midsummer night

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    4th line from the bottom, "you're see", maybe you'll see. Anyway, this was a wonderful and unique piece. You're very talented hun. I look forward to reading more. 5/5

    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    I like this poem if flows well although i'm not sure about some of the wording I gave this one 4/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Such a heartfelt poem...and i see its your first love poem...you did a great job on it..

    "Have all but love; have none but love,
    Drink to silence or drink to me.
    I am your virtues; your weakened dreams,
    Once upon the Greenland Seas."

    ^^ these are my favorite lines..i dont know why but i just love them..they really caught my attention...good job.5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    What a terrific success. It's too marvelous for meager words to offer merit, I believe. This piece further rings a bell with me. It actually reminds me of Robert Browning's poem: My Last Duchess. Not only does it seem an allusion to the said poem, but it also works as a good comeback for the Duke's new wife's point of view. But then, again... perhaps it's just me.
    I truly enjoyed this piece. All the best.

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I thought the poem was very heartfelt and written well, the imagery and vocab were great as well. I loved how it was a love poem but rather unique from most others. Keep up the great work 5/5 GG23

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