Who are you [acrostic]

by JaMeS   Aug 12, 2007


Where did you appear from
Hundreds around and yet I'm for you
Object of such attraction

A vision of incredible beauty
Rain drenched perfection
Every second my mind race with emotions

Yearn to your lips speak
Obsessing as i struggle through the crowds
Unsaid and leaving me clueless

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    This is a good poem.
    Well done..

    " A vision of incredible beauty
    Rain drenched perfection "

    Like those lines the most.
    Enjoyed reading it.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    Well done again. as always i loved the thought of this poem. a short poem with wonderful meaning. the structure was also very well put. keep up the good work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    This was simple though still like the meaning in it. Well i like how you used acrostic to describe what you feel, the imagination were okay.4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    WOW. Babe, thats awesome.. It's like a totally different you.. It's so different to your others. Acrostics are really hard to do well but you nailed it boy!

    Well done, Take care,
    Greta, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Good poem. Confusing a bit but the meaning is powerful. I also loved the imagery.

    Keep it up && Take care!

    -Shannon <3

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