Beautiful, yet confusing.
Reguardless... 5/5

Dude...you ok?
or is this like a fake subject?
sounds like the whole me and nicole thing...
with the whole "me staying home while she went out..cheating thing"
youll be happy to hear..i am FINALLY over her..lol
for real this time..
so what you been up to?
how you been treating my necklace..lol
jk jk

A rather well writen story you have put together here... And your rhyming has not faded I see...
Overall there is not much to say but great work.. A very enjoyable poem

As expected =)

Take care

.......people are cheaters....they always will be, hint, don't give your heart unless you are 100% sure that it is worth it.

Oh my goodness this has to be one of the best poems that i have ever read! great job!

You put alot of feelin into this,
words of passion =]
its really good
xx

Aww so sad, like this part:I pray to God, Let me just find the right key
to lock into her heart, and make her listen to me
Maybe if she really understood the love I gave
She might understood, its her I crave

Beautiful poem excellent job

Dude wonderful poem truly great job (^_^) 5/5

Very sad and excellent write 5/5