"The world has changed drastically-- not for the best,
And meanwhile you hold on to your vest.
Its kept you warm, yes, but you're still depressed,
So what has it done for you in the end?"
especially liked this part...so philosophical. 4/5

Thank you. You reminded me of something nice I wrote. I do forget alot of it.

New best friend this was amazing. I love your diction and the creepy tone of voice here. I felt you went into alot of detail here and that's what made this so great. I love the imagery and your title is awesome too. Keep it up hun :) Nik