Silence

by the come back   Aug 14, 2007


The silence that hurts me,
the silence that breaks me,
the silence that I will die for
and the silence that i can't live for

I will die because of silence,
the silence that I want to be heard
the silence that I will keep forever
and the silence that keeps me to surrender

I don't want to live any more,
I want to be alone
I don't wanna be loved by any body
I want to be left by everybody

In every poem I make,
there is a reason why i take
because of silence I want to break,
that in my poem's I can erase.

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  • 16 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    I feel like that all the time and want 2 b alone cuz i believe that it will make it betta but it doesnt :P

    it was a great poem, great work :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Short but too descriptive on every end..keep it up!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I like the style of this one, the silience can be unbearable, or it can be a blessing, the flow is god, the emotion is strong, to make it better instead of using words like wanna use want. Other than that this was a perecrt penned poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by lish

    This is the best so far really good :)
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Very interesting, it is original and you wrote this piece greatly. First two stanzas are the greatest. You created haunting atmosphere, and I can hear that silence!

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