Thats different - its good well done xxx

I like your stories..You know how to tell a lot of things between a story and four lines
And your excellence on executing the poetry form well was full
Keep it up,
Laura

Now this piece I must say was quite the unique read. The word choice as always upto your standards but are always unique and hold great emotions which you portray deeply into your poetry. The last line was great that to me was truely the best part. You ended this the exact same way as you started it, strong. Overall I enjoyed this read and found the style to be different yet enjoyable. Well done on this. 5/5 ~mel

I've never read a poem like this. its well written and very intersting. 5/5 i just like your whole style of writting.

I loved it, once again.
And, it proves you can make any lines work. Lol. Because, these aren't long lines and it's perfectly written, once again. (:

Keep up the great work, hun.