Miss You

by katy   Aug 15, 2007


You were apart of my life once,
I could hold you in my arms,
We would laugh together,
You would look at me with love,
Your eyes the entrance to your soul,

I remember when you were next to me,
I remember when we smiled together,
I remember when we were there for each other,
I remember when i looked after you,

The times we spent together,
Now seem not long enough,
I just want kiss your cheek once more,
Hug you once more,
Joke with you once more,
See you face once more,

I need to feel that you are still with me,
Even in spirit,
I need to know you are there,
Protecting me,
Loving me with your whole heart,

I feel your presence around me,
I turn to look but you are not there,
I couldn't imagine you not in my life,
But it has now been 3 years,
I still don't believe you are gone,

Why cant i accept that you are not here,
That you will not come back,
I will only see you when i see that bright light,
I think of you all day and night,
You are never out of my mind,

I love you Nan,
I always will,
I hope you are happy where you are.

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This is dedicated to my Nan who died 3 years ago in last march, please comment thanks xx

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  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Mmm , ok
    let me see the espression and the feelings are expressed good way and clear but the paragraph lengh are not confrom with the natural stanza count of 4 lines

    and then the rhyming is poor making the poem a bit weak

    in all the expreesion si strong and the idea you are talking about is wonderfull but you lack the poetic technic a bit
    fair vote_^

  • 15 years ago

    by Jaimee

    Awww, that's so sad. =[
    fantastic poem though!
    great job. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    Really touching. i think bout my bf and my lil sis that passed away every single day. it's hard. your poem is really true.

  • 16 years ago

    by this is only the beggining

    Wow this is really goo u have some talent

  • 16 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow this is so good. It almost made me cry! =]

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