Prayer of one heart (doditsu)

It was short and very simple but the message was strongly there. it was beautifully written, nicely done

The time when you are bored might be the time you write your best work.
This is short but sweet. It is a really nice poem. 5/5

Kalee

Hehe ur boredom was made a great simple poem... keep on writing 5/5

Very nice, even though it was a bit short.

Hmm...It was alright, I loved the discription it really caught my eye, but it didn't quite flow to me. It was still a pretty good pen, but I must say I believe you could do better :)