Great poem. Very well written and very deep. I can relate to this poem 'cause I'm going through a break up right now and all I want to do is cut myself. But anyway, this poem was great. 5/5

-Shannon <3

This poem to be was quite cliche, I feel like i've read thousands of poems like this before.. Sorry to say.. Nothing really stood out to me like it was a good poem but just too plain for me. Although I know many people would be able to relate to this piece and it would really hit their hearts I just couldn't find all that much emotion throughout it. The structure was great as was the flow so overall from me a 4/5. ~mel

Good poem.. You write it nicely.. The emotion you put inside this poem was strong... And the last stanza,, nice.. :) The flow was great too..
Well done... :)
5/5

Okay, so this will probably be brutal to you (which means you don't have to comment me back if you don't want to) but I'm not sure I liked this poem very much either. I think SlaveToTheMusic said my thoughts exactly... Lots of people write like this, and nothing was Really Yours enough to stand out and hit me in the face *so to speak. I am currently going through a break up with my boyfriend of two and a half years, so I Am infact able to relate to it. Well done there...But... I dunno, I've been feeling emotion all the time lately because of a broken heart, and for some reason your poem didn't quite do this. It didn't bring out the feeling. You need to put more feeling, and less explanation maybe?
I haven't been writing in a long time, but it seemed like you were saying why you were doing it, rather than how much it hurt. Or what it looked like instead of the cries for mercy in your heart. The twisted knot of fear in your stomach. The confusion in your head...
Well, I don't know.. Maybe I'm just cranky.
But I catch feeling over imagery, and I just didn't get alot of feeling out of it..
Your imagery was pretty good though.
I'll give you another 4/5... It's a good stepping stone though. I just know you can do better. (yes, I've read some of your stuff.)

I love the idea on this one though i know i've read lots of poems like this... the emotions were really intense. can't find any flaws in this one and there are lots of lines/stanzas that i really like in your work. Great work!

Wow uhmm this almost made me cry. i guess its because i was thinking of you doing all this. :[ and i hope you dont. but anyways you spelled screw like scew. so you might want to fix that :] uhmm but i dont what else to say about this one. 5/5 though.

I would say you are a real explicit poet :) This poem also stands out as it is cohesive and very nicely put together 5/5

Tc
Fsams

Wow!
This flowed beautifully, it was so powerful and deeply filled with emotion.
Every stanza was constructed perfectly.
A very sad and moving piece of writing.
I give you 5/5
Love Tara-Kay
x

I luv it!!!! i kno exactly how it feels!! <333

This is very well written with a lot of emotion it has some good imigery and the retorical question at the end is very thoughtfull.

Very deep poem
I love it.
I can relate to this one beyond reasoning :)

~Mz.Raven

Deep.
and much realted.
nicely done.
<3

Very emotional, every stanza is greatly written. The imagery in this poem is very good, and its flow is excellent.
My favorite stanza is:

-I grab a small mirror,
And throw it at the wall.
I use the glass to carve in my arm,
"Life screws us all."-

Well done, 5/5 from me

Oh My God,, This Poem Is So Good I Sometimes Feel Like Doing That Myself But I eventualy Talk myself Out Of It=]x

Incredible,
I felt your emotion. You did a wonderful job, the flow was amazing and the rhymes were magnificent. You have a real talent.
It was so amazing, I loved it.

Nicely written and some good portrayal of emotions, I don't personally like the poem as I'm not really into self harming poems to the extent of this, although I do admire the way its written, emotions and the structure of it.

5/5 Well done :)

Dave.

Very good poem, the imagery and the emotions were very well profound. And you kept the readers attention all the way. Great job, keep it up.

Thats a really deep poem love it

Very well written.
I love the way it flowed.
sad subject, but we all have those times.
Great work. 5/5

You are truely a gifted writer, your going on my favorites!