My Wish

by amber   Aug 16, 2007


If only all dreams came true
because then I would have you

I need superman to sweep me off my feet
It was you that I did meet

I finally found the one I love
but apparently someone from up above

had something else in mind.
You are one of a kind.

There is no one like you
and you have no clue

That you are my wish,
you are my dream which

just won't come true.
I will never have you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    This poem is completely same like your last one(I think that title is"Wish") You have same mistakes. It is childish and it is typical love poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    A good sweet poem however the flow was a little off in the last stanza.

  • 16 years ago

    by Raven

    I agree with XxMExX
    But my poems are sumtimes like that so no worries :)
    But the rhyming was beyond perfect loved it

    5/5

    ~Mz.Raven

  • 16 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    I think you could make it longer but you do not have to it is great the way it is says a lot well done 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiller

    The only thing I have to say, is the flow was a little iffy. Rhyming was good =P Lol if you could get the flow perfect, this would be a truly amazing poem.

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