The only thing I have to say, is the flow was a little iffy. Rhyming was good =P Lol if you could get the flow perfect, this would be a truly amazing poem.

I think you could make it longer but you do not have to it is great the way it is says a lot well done 5/5

I agree with XxMExX
But my poems are sumtimes like that so no worries :)
But the rhyming was beyond perfect loved it

5/5

~Mz.Raven

A good sweet poem however the flow was a little off in the last stanza.

This poem is completely same like your last one(I think that title is"Wish") You have same mistakes. It is childish and it is typical love poem.