This poem was very well written and it flowed really nicely, too. I think you did a really great job on writing it. You expressed yourself very well. 5/5

~Kristina

This poem is really well written.
I love the repitition.

keep up the good work:)

WOW! i think this is the best poem I have seen on here. =O Not only is it on a topic that strikes my fancy...but it was just so beautifully written. Its so perfect. 5/5! :) Is this really about a girl you know?...you should give her this poem anonymously.

Wow, thats stunning... some girl out there missin out on a poet!

I could only hope for a guy to write something like that about me. its so sweet. loved it!

Sweet and lovely tribute to your loved one. I agree with the others you should give her the poem!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

This is cute! :) I like it! Good job! (i agree with the others... give it to her! :)