A great message has learned by reading this great poem, but still the question is can we wait for a brighter day?
you have touched my heart with this poem, because i really love the way you have wrote many reality as a poem.
keep it up and a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it

This was a worderful poem... simple yet the message were clear. well, i adore all the stanzas coz, just like the tastelss have written, hopes were enveloped within the lines. and i guess everyday each people hopes for the better and i think most people can't find satisfaction (don't get me wrong) because we wanted to be perfect for that what the world holds. (correct me if i'm wrong) =)

Great poem. I love the lesson behind this poem. Liked the word choice and the flow was smooth. 5/5
Honesty rarely ever stays,
Long enough for us to learn,
Respect, love, and praise
Fave stanza ^^^^^^
~ Lainey

Wow, this poem is so deep and greatly written. I like every stanza, whole piece holds so great message within the lines. I like the wording in this one, and the flow is good, too.
Truly well done, 5/5 from me

Excellent poem. A wondefully message was portayed here. This poem was very well written and I can only imagine how hard this type of poetry was. The flow and rhyming was good too.
Very well done. 5/5

-Shannon <3

Wow, i loved this one. it flows beautifully and the choice of words, wow, could really feel the emotion behind this poem. well done.

xx trace

I believe you did quite well with this difficult format style

That was very good
I quite enjoyed that actually
i loved the rhyming lines
and how they switched off and on
nice work
5/5
kaila

That was really good, it turned out really well even tho u said it was hard

I like this one better
5/5

The message portrayed was stunning I truely enjoyed reading this work with such a great meaning portrayed behind it. The style I have tried many times and only pull off pieces which are not to my interest so I give you praise on creating something capturing. Overall a great piece. Well done ~mel

Even thought it may be hard you did an excellent job on it, everything just perfect
xx

This is not my favorite one of yours, bit it's interesting and nicely written. Good choice of words through the whole poem, and you picked great form.
My favorite lines are:

-Stuck amid our faulty ways,
Enraged without concern
Can we wait for brighter days-

This was simply amazing. i'm sure a lot of people want the same things, i know i sure can. this poem flowed very well and was greatly written. 5/5

~Kristina

I am truly amazed by your talent as well as the way you write different forms of poetry. You truly are gifted and deserve more than 5/5 keep it up!!!

This poem is very good.. and it has a strong meaning. you leave the reader questioning. great job on the vocabulary. your flow was great. your rhyming was awesome. all together it was a great poem. my fav part:

Honesty rarely ever stays,
Long enough for us to learn,
Respect, love, and praise

It had a very strong meaning to me :)

Excellent Job

5/5

Wow, you're really good at different types of poetry. The flow was flawless, excellent choice of words. This piece deserve a 5/5!

Wow. This has got to be my favorite by you. It help a meaningful & powerful message && it just makes the reader think. The emotions were strong & the flow was flawless.

"Honesty rarely ever stays,
Long enough for us to learn,
Respect, love, and praise"

^ I love the stanza. Overall: 5.5 Amazing job. (:

-- Stephanie Lynn .+.

Wow, Ok I truely loved this piece it was quite amazing. I remember reading alot of your older pieces when your name was different. I can tell you, you have improved alot and I love this. The style again a good choice for this poem and the meaning portrayed was really interesting. the flow spot on it didn't faulter at all. Well done on this beautiful piece.~Mel

This one was just amazing. The message was powerful and hope was evident all throughout it. I have never read anything in this style before but it was one I truly did enjoy. Well done *5/5*