She took her life all because of him

by TillyMariex   Aug 18, 2007


A girl can only take so much
before she takes her life
she doesn't need to think about it
she just needs that knife
but he's already done so much
to kill her inside
his words like poison
not caring if he's the reason she died
its all his fault
he should feel so guilty
he said he loved her
making her go crazy
he told her exactly what she wanted to hear
but he never bothered saying what was true
then one day he just broke her heart
with 3 simple words 'I hate you'
the meaning was something she knew
she felt it all her life
but pain was all she felt
when she sat holding that knife
but this time it wasn't meant for her wrist
it was for something that he stole
she whispered 'i hate you too'
and brought the knife to her soul

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  • 16 years ago

    by BrokenVodkaBottle

    Omg this is another great poem you end them so good!!
    well done :):)
    an this happend 2me the guy i loved did this 2me except i only ended up in hospital!!

  • 16 years ago

    by StarvingForPerfection

    Wow. I love this. It's so sad, but you did a great job writing it. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow! amazing job...and thanx for the suggestion on my poem...i'll try doing that.

    this poems wonderfully written.5/5 of course.

  • 16 years ago

    by lizzle

    Love dis poem!!!its great!

  • 16 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    Awww, it's cute and sad at the same time. Mostly sad, yeah I know I must be slightly demented to think that was cute but oh well. I love it! awesome poem!