What Would the World be Like...

by kitkat girl   Aug 19, 2007


What Would the World be Like...

What would the world be like...
If breathing, beating, lungs, heart, were unnecessary
All my muscles at a stand-still, and yet I'd be
alive.

What would the world be like...
If all I needed was, your hand to touch, pulse to feel, Those moments I was shattered, across the floor, theyd
disappear.

What would the world be like...
If the heavenly stars, were visible each and every night,
Would their light lead me, Out of the shadows and
exposed.

What would the world be like...
If you smelled of roses, and I of lilacs
Apart of nature, unforsaken to senses,
beautiful.

If the northern star lead me, to the aroma of roses,
Motionless, you and I there, enough,
What would it be like?

=="Those moments I" in the above poem, is supposed to be part of the next line but for some reason the program won't let me put it that way, just a little fyi.--

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  • 16 years ago

    by Princess of snow

    Wow, this poem is superb. Great repetion along with imagery and such nice details.
    I like this piece. It's perfect. I give it a 5/5!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Well I like the message in this poem, well done. I think you did a fantastic work in this piece. I really like the last line.

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Beautifully written poem....flowed nicely and i love how you used a question at the end... wonderful job.5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    I enjoyed this poem I like the repition the flow is a little off however the emotion was there.