Comments : The Teapot And The Clock

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Unique and very creative. I like the story behind the poem, and the way that you wrote this one is really excellent. The ending is great, it adds amazing effect to the whole piece.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fran

    I'm drawn to poems with unusual titles and your poem certainly took me into it's own strange but fascinating world. The sinister and dark undercurrent give it an added poignancy. Unique and excellent!

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    An amusing exchange of wit between a teapot and a clock, as each of them boasts its distinct advantages to the other. And vice versa. And, yet, the latter portion, wherein the actual was conveyed, captivated me further. Very neat, Miss C!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    "wherein the actual was conveyed..."

    My apologies, I simply meant to say actual story, actually.

    Happy Holidays! ^_^