This is agreat
great story line to it
it caught my attention and held it
through the ending wasnt what i expected
most people wouldnt have desrcibed the feeling
anger, suicidle i dont know
but i wasnt expecting frustration
tis good no matter
and thx for the comment:D:D
and glad you wrote another poem
ps i was wondering is there two of you in this one account??
How innocent!! this poem is. and its simply great. dear nazeer here i just wat to say you to panned your . just do not submit the poem panned also i mean fromat and givr them the shape of stana. hope you got it what i want to say you.
anyways. great job 5/5