Comments : Its a frustration

  • Very nicely written, another very well put together poetry. Nice portrayal of emotions.

    5/5 well done :)

  • 10 years ago

    by fuzzy

    Well done ... you're damn good

  • 10 years ago

    by Colourful Mind

    What a change at the end very clever x x x

  • 10 years ago

    by LURVE

    Love your poem!~ talking about student years, teenage love! SWEET! (o:

  • 10 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    This is really a nice penned!!
    keep up the ood work.

    God bless u

  • 10 years ago

    by Corruption

    This is agreat
    great story line to it
    it caught my attention and held it
    through the ending wasnt what i expected
    most people wouldnt have desrcibed the feeling
    as frustration
    probably depression
    anger, suicidle i dont know
    but i wasnt expecting frustration
    tis good no matter
    and thx for the comment:D:D
    and glad you wrote another poem

    Keenan
    ps i was wondering is there two of you in this one account??

  • 10 years ago

    by Fsams

    Really so sad, but its flowing well and very descriptive. I like how you have described the whole thing. Yep its really a frustation but worth 5/5 :)

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 10 years ago

    by Mack Bopape

    It's very sad to see someone you love holding another hand. This is a very nice poem and I'm loving it. i'm sorry if it is a true story.

  • 10 years ago

    by Fr0g PrincE

    Yeah.. Well done frends.. 5/5 for this poem.. Yeah, meaningfullly from a poet's heart.. Goodluck and happy weekend to both of you..

  • 10 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    Very well written 5/5 deep and meaningful

    Your friend,
    xD
    ~NinjaGirl~

  • 10 years ago

    by Mack Bopape

    You get 5/5 keep it up.

  • 10 years ago

    by Mack Bopape

    You get 5/5 keep it up.

  • 10 years ago

    by ANDRE AQUINO

    I can say that your a great poet... i give you 5/5 for that,...

  • 10 years ago

    by Manar

    Innocent ,simple and real!!!!!!! i luved it so..:)

  • 10 years ago

    by Hebe

    Great poem.
    Deep emotions, very well discribed.
    A great piece or writing.
    Take care

  • 10 years ago

    by Keith

    Wow, didnt see that comin, good write and clever ending, not bad at all :)

  • 10 years ago

    by FreeTigerMouse

    I don't feel these verses truly rhyme, but it is not the point here.

    The beginning describes pure yet deep friendship I love for it's innocence and for that many people did experience it.

    The end shocked me for that it is a bit indolent but deeply disappointing. This disillusion haven't led to suicide or something tragic. However it shocked his candid soul. And that's worse.

    Great!

  • 10 years ago

    by Mish

    I really loved this 5 stars!! Oh and thank you for your comment.

  • 10 years ago

    by Boy

    How innocent!! this poem is. and its simply great. dear nazeer here i just wat to say you to panned your . just do not submit the poem panned also i mean fromat and givr them the shape of stana. hope you got it what i want to say you.
    anyways. great job 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by miss insecurity

    That is so sad
    0.0

    so raw and just so sad