Comments : Begging For Ease

  • 11 years ago

    by Laura

    Loved it 5/5
    laura marie (sweets lol)

  • 11 years ago

    by Sharon

    Simply Amazing

  • 7 years ago

    by Sharon Brook

    Loved your emotion and while reading this it gave me inspiration to write another poem Thanx

  • 7 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    I found my favorite poem of yours. The flow is amazing, the words are beautiful. =) You need to keep writing mister.

    "Then an old man stopped me
    He told me "life isn't what it should be
    We look one way
    And the other the next day
    We are all confused
    And emotionally abused
    Keep your calm
    Don't follow your palm
    Live your life
    With out the knife
    Someday you'll see
    How great life can be
    We all know there's nature
    And there's a preacher
    Nature has her way
    And the preacher can only say
    Nature can stop the preacher's reign
    But the preacher can never stop the rain."
    He said saddened "I'm a preacher
    I'm nothing compared to nature"
    His words went soft
    As darkness went aloft
    He preached to me once more
    Before he showed me to the door
    "Things happen, because they should,
    You can change them only if you would." "

    My favorite bit. :) Very inspirational. <3

  • 7 years ago

    by Amber

    Love it