Unknown Love

by IchixXxCrushing   Aug 23, 2007


The First Day I Talked To You
My Heart Fell Instantly,

So Kind And Sweet
I Fell So Easily,

But I Was Not The Only One Under Your Spell
Others Had Fallen Too,

You Knew That Some Of Your Friends Liked You,
But I Bet You Didn't Know That There Was Me,

Now So Lost In The Crowd,
Knowing I Won't Be Chosen,
I Wait.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hinata

    It's awsome I felt a lot when I read this poem it's amazing.

  • 16 years ago

    by littlemissxsunshine

    My favorite♥
    keep it up
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Awww.. Ichy!! This is such a beautiful, sad poem! Sure, it's a little short, but you packed so much emotion into it! You did such a wonderful job with this piece, truly flawless! I can relate to this, I've been through this exact same thing before. Keep writing girl!! Love ya =) 5/5 <3 <3 <3

    ~Rikku~

  • 16 years ago

    by Yuna

    Hey! I liked this poem a lot! But if I may ask, is there a hint of truth hidden inside? Well even so, I can tell that you wrote this with your heart and I love that about your poems. They're so true! I give you a 5/5!!Great job!

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