Wintry Snow [haiku, 4 stanzas]

by Princess of snow   Aug 23, 2007


Note: each stanza is a haiku. I put them together to create one whole poem.

WINTRY SNOW

White, cold flakes of snow
Fallen beauties of winter
Seek adoration

Calmly dance as one
These fragile life of winter
Bring thoughts of true love

Chilly wind guide them
Purely, gracefully in sight
'til their bodies be gone

With thoughts of sweet love
And beauty of perfect peace
Be a white sight.

THANK YOU FOR READING
comments appreciated.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Superb my dear. I loved your haikus. Its really worth comments and votes. Well described and unique. 5/5

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by 4 track demo

    You got me, you took me to a place i had long forgotten, back to a sweet memory of another time, of once upon a better life...thanks

  • 16 years ago

    by janiL

    I like haikus..they're always about nature..=)
    and you made a beautiful piece of literature here!! ^__^

    it's just sad that we don't have winter where i come from..X_X

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Little Dreamer

    Nice..i have yet to try a haiku..but this seem to work well..the flow was good and they seemed to fit and make larger picture together. Good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonesomeme

    This was interesting, from reading your last poem and this one, you have a niche for nature...the streams and snowflakes...really beautiful...just a couple suggestions on this one

    "These fragile life of winter"

    This might need some rephrasing or to change these to this or life to lives but I thinks it screws up the syllabals. And there the last stanza:
    With thoughts of sweet love
    And beauty of perfect peace
    Be a white sight.

    I am not really sure what this means, it kind of doesnt make sense...you might omit it or find another ending, the other 3 haikus are strong enough to support it as a complete poem alone without the 4th stanza....Really good job though! 5/5

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