Nicely written poem, but so sad!! But yes, I know how you feel, I was in the same situation not long ago. Well, almost same. But yeah, great poem, great rhyming, emotions, everything. Keep up the good work!!

Ohh wow. at first i couldnt figure out who this was about but then i remembered. haha. uhmm i dont know what to say except 5/5

It's obvious you wrote this from the heart. Such an amazing piece. I liked the nice-easy style but i think you too many filler words. And it sounded as you were just talking to the reader at some times. Although it didnt matter much cause you superbly finished it. Good job.

This poem is really sad, I'm sorry this happened to you.
You're poem was really good, but you lost your flow at one point but you ended it nicely. Great job!

The emotions in the piece are greatly expressed, and the rhyming is also very good, the rhymes don't seem forced. My favorite stanza is:
-I cant believe I fell for you,
And for all your stupid lies.
Tell me, what did I do,
To deserve so many nights of worthless cries?-
The flow of the whole piece is great, too.

The mournful feelings are visible in this piece. Meaning that the word choice really collocates making it a real well strung piece. 5/5 all the way

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I really love the ending to this poem it was very heartfelt as ive noticed with your other poems you can feel alot of emotion and meaning

5/5 from me

The emotion in this really seeps from the words. its very strong, and very sad, and added to the knot in my stomache I've had for the last two days is quite powerful indeed haha. Being cheated on hurts, being left after you've been cheated on is terrible too. Very strong emotions, good rhyming and flow. Don't give up on love because of just one person. People can tend to be stupid.

Sorry but I don't like it. It is too typical and emotions aren't greatly expressed. Atmosphere could be stronger. This is just my opinion maybe others like this poem more but I think that it isn't good.