Comments : God Damned Cliche

  • 10 years ago

    by Angie

    Very heartfelt and emotional, you can feel the pain within.

  • 10 years ago

    by swill

    I know you aren't dear...but you will be...and you know it too...smile a little today for dhaval, okay? :)

    what are the odds that you write exactly how i feel? relationships are sucky and we know it, na na na na na! :D

  • 10 years ago

    by Poetess

    For such a long time I've been trying to write exactly what I just read now. This is amazing, I can tell it comes straight from the heart, heh. I don't know what to say. I just wanna make a copy of this and hang it on my wall, haha. I absolutely love it. 5/5.
    Never stop writing.

    ` Liz =]

  • 10 years ago

    by Aisha

    This is a wicked poem! i luv it ! the rhyme relly gd! wicked stuff

    5/5
    tc,
    Aisha

  • 10 years ago

    by Jeffreys Girl

    Right now i feel the same way but i really dont know what to do. i dont sleep i dont eat and its like when he left my world fell apart and now im just trying to figure out what it was that i did wrong... nicely put
    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Little long but fair... :LoL:

  • 10 years ago

    by [J.e.n.n.a]

    I luv your poem!
    Keep up the good work!

  • 10 years ago

    by bluefate

    I really liked this poem...
    so strong emotions
    you are very good!

  • 5 years ago

    by princess

    Great work.beautifully written

  • 5 years ago

    by princess

    Great work.beautifully written

  • 4 years ago

    by Mary

    I know the feeling and you expressed it so well

  • 2 years ago

    by cantchangeme

    This is a very true expression of what it feels like after a relationship falls apart. When we speak in cliches and are lost in the pain. Captures a moment in my life a couple of years back. Nice writing