Comments : Irresistable. [Acrosstic]

  • 16 years ago

    by Miranda

    Good poem for just fooling around.

    Sexy thigh's
    Intense eyes.
    Seductive hips
    Tempting lips.

    That part is great.Well good job,a 5/5 from me.-Rado

  • 16 years ago

    by Alissa

    This is pretty good, I liked the words you used. It was very good, quite a lot of talent to create a piece of this. Very limited options and space to open up your mind, you did very well to keep

  • 16 years ago

    by Princess of snow

    I love this poem.
    I like how the short useage
    of words created such a good flow.
    Keep up your good work. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was really good. it flowed so well and was a beautiful piece of work. A creative and sweet piece
    love Tara-Kay
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Nuh

    Wow thats hot lolz

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    This acrostic poem was great.

    ~Sexy thigh's
    Intense eyes.
    Seductive hips
    Tempting lips~

    *That stanza was great!*

    Keep writing! [5.5]

    Best wishes,

    Sarah xx