Wow. This was really good. I liked it a lot., It reminds me of every young person that has fallen in love. I really liked it. And I hope that u can find that one true love one day. Who knows maybe he is right under ur nose. ;)

-Alex

Oh so true
can really relate to this
and i hope you're feeling better than I am...
:) keep up the good work
x x

Short, sweet, beautiful!

I like...and young love is always the most purest, when you're young enough to JUST LOVE, lol til you get older and the past holds you back. Anyway good job :)

I really liked this. The flow was perfect. This peice was short but simple and expressed your point with little words, which is great. Never let others tell you how you feel. I have plenty of peices on that. Lol.
But once again, great job!
5/5

Amber...

You are so right! Why should others comment on how you feel? They'll always have opinions, but come on what's the big deal? 5/5

Wow this poem is really good.=)