Comments : You Bring Smiles To Me (Kyrielle)

  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    Thank you God for my family
    Showing me all their beauty
    Letting me take this life's journey
    You bring smiles to me

    This is a really beautiful poem. Family mean the world to me, and I can see that your family mean alot to you too.

    Take Care.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rasheed Khokhar

    Dear Cindy:

    Excellent job .... :) Specially Last Stanza :)

    Thank you God for my family
    Showing me all their beauty
    Letting me take this life's journey
    You bring smiles to me

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is a very lovely dedication, loved it. You know the sort of poems i love reading from you, this is surely one of them.

    You are surely blessed to have such sort of family.

    And i could also say that you have dedicated a poem to my future daughter in law... :o)

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    A very beautiful and heartfelt piece 5/5 it flowed together so well and the wording was great!

    xD
    ~NinjaGirl~

  • 16 years ago

    by chavii

    Cindy, This is really a beautiful heartwarming poem. Yes nothing is more precious in world than our own dear family .

    Love chavii.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Cindy, this was so sweet, you pulled of this form of poetry very well.
    I loved it as always
    love Tara-Kay
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by whit

    This is really good

  • 16 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Cindy,I felt so good after reading this piece of work.God has blessed you.You seem so positive.Keep it going.Take care.5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    This is a beautiful poem.
    The feelings you have for your family are very clear, nothing but love..
    A wonderful piece of writing.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by njabulo b

    Once again this is a brilliant poem, you real show that you love your family and thats is good and your poem is nicely expressed.

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Thank you God for my family
    Showing me all their beauty
    Letting me take this life's journey
    You bring smiles to me

    awwe very innocent words. and very caring for others. great job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lithium

    That is such a cute poem you captured the innocence of children cindy well done

  • 16 years ago

    by sandra

    Your family is as lucky to have you as you are to have them:) Also even tho we may not all have kids, it feels so "relatable" (know thats not a word hehe) but you know what i mean. Look forward to reading more of your stuff, cheers.

  • 16 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    This was really good.Each stanza was very well written.A wonderful choice of words.This is another great piece of yours.Well Done!
    Take care <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Aisha

    Beautifully written! it says eevrything neone needs to say!

    tc, AIsha

  • 16 years ago

    by Kitty kat

    So sweet i liek it

  • 16 years ago

    by chelsea

    Great poem Cindy, Keep up the good work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Very nice write cindy you've become a very good writer. a pleasure as always ben thompson

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    A beautiful dedication to your wonderful family.

  • 16 years ago

    by Marjan

    And you bring smiles to me Cindy :)
    I'd never read a Kyrielle before. Is it always as good as this or was it you that made it as beautiful as this? :)
    take care,
    -Marjan