I find that the best poems written are the onces people write on the spur of the moment. its pretty amazing to me how the words just come together in your mind and flow so well together amd make so much more sence. your an amazing writter. and i can completly relate to this poem. and i understand it completly keep up the amazing work

with lots of care and love.
melanie

I love it it's awesome!

Wow, this was amazing. i can totally relate and I totally understand. Great job! :)

EXECELLENT!

Thats really good. u could feel the emotiona dn i know just how u feel.

WOW....I feel the same way everyday!! Great Poem!! keep up the good work!! 8)

Excellent poem! Great job.

This poem is REALLY about life. I know the feeling when you think no one no more may hurt you, when you think you have to enclose yourself to be safer. And still hope you'll se that person again.

It was a great poem It had a lot of feeling keep up the good work

I hope we meet again,
In the future,
When the time is more appropriate,
For our situations.

nice concept of writing ramdomely. i loved the last stanza mst. great work
i will give you 5/5 becasue you deserve. you poems are nice

I preferred this to what ive read of yours so far but again i think you should focus on the flow and wording of it all! reading your stuff you can sense you have alot of talent and in time it will really shine :)

I think we all have those moments when we wonder what and why we are here. We want to follow our dreams but other things hold us back at times.... but keep on reaching and will get what it is you want....

A very heartfelt, inspiring and powerful write. Well done.

Nice poem and i understand it cuz i feel the same way....5/5

~shattered
dreams~

Haha, beautiful and talented. I really loved your writing scheme. Definitely keep me posted in the future.

Another great poem =)
i could tell that it really came from ur heart
keep up the good work
imi xxx

Hey, I thought it was very emotional... I can tell that u put ur feelings into it. I love the first stanza the best. I think you need to work more on the structure and rhyming patterns... but even with out it, it was really touching, good job!

Take care,

::MELI::

I can deff. relate in so many ways to this poem![[= Your a very good writer! =D 5/5

Jeanette

Heyy u know wat? although we may not be able to control our life, we can control our choices and it's our steps today, that lay out our direction tomorrow....
one thing that can express anything is words.

I'm so confused bout everything, i love this line, i'm sitting at my desk thinking the same exact thing!

Your poem has a deep meaning to it.
i felt a connection thru your writing.
you have an appealing way of making your pointy thru your poetry. plaz keep writing
5/5
Kat