DROWNING

by Angelic Scars   Aug 25, 2007


My fingers skim the water

rippleing my fate

touching echos of the ones before

who died in this same state

im floating in this liquid

im breathing in the death

i can not wisper a goodbye

to the ones that i have left

i feel my lungs acheing

wanted air they cannot have

i feel my hearts beat shakeing

i feel deaths stab

i see the underwater world

so beautiful and deadly

i close my eyes and release myself

letting death surround me

i suddenly feel everything stop...

and i become and echo

just like the ones before me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Isabelle

    Just the sort of metaphoric poem I was looking forward to finding and reading today .. thanks.

    this was so beautifully done.

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