My Name Is Hakim Jamil

by lish   Aug 27, 2007


My name is Hakim Jamil
and I am 10 years old
an orphan is what I am
always sick and very cold

I live in Aiken,
a small town in the USA
Where they rape the young women,
and bash you if you're gay

I want to be a teacher
so I must do good in school.
You cut my funding down
so I may remain a fool

They sent my daddy away
all the way to war.
He didn't want to go
but they told him it was law

It makes me sad what mommy says
but I know hes happy in heaven
he still could have waited
until I turned eleven

......................

My name is Hakim Jamil
and I'm now twenty three.
They want to send me to war
but all I'll do is flee

I see what happens to people
I know they never return.
I've seen what happens to families
they crumble and they burn

I recently got married
to a wife that I adore.
We already have 2 kids
but I see myself wanting more

I want to tell my story
about the lasting effects of war,
about how you have no choice
because after all, its law.

My name is Alicia Kimball
and i hear your silent plea.
I'll get your word across
just leave it up to me

I'm fourteen years old
and have got alot to learn.
I haven't got your trust
but that I will soon earn

I'm here to tell your story
the story of your life.
It's all about a war
2 kids, and a beautiful wife

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  • 16 years ago

    by unknown

    Wonderful piece.. The emotion very strong and powerful. It's one of the best story about life i've ever read.. It flowed very well too.. And three last stanzas,, it was a great ending for your poem..
    Very Nice..
    Keep up the good work..
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Wow, great story. I can really relate to it!!!
    Beautiful pieces!!! 5/5 from me!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by azii

    I'M TOTALLY SPEECHLESS THIS POEM IS ABSOLUTELY AWESOME LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVEIT!!!!! SO MEANINGFULL AND .. JUST GREAT!!! IT'S ON MY FAVS AND YOUR ONM MY FAVS I REALLY ENJOY READING YOU RWORK CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE

  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Hhmmm. did you write this all yourself. or were those words from someone else (the stuff about jamil)? i really liked this.

    i dont know if this was intentional, but bad grammar was used.

    I want to be a teacher
    so I must do good in school.[do well]

    =] 5

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

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    this poem leaves me speechless
    i need a slap in the face and a step down to reality.

    take away the worlds pedestool (sp) and let them look at the world.
    great job