Comments : Memories Persevere

  • 16 years ago

    by Angie

    Nat, this is simply beautiful and heartfelt. Yes, he is with you all the time.... this write is also very inspiring to others who may be experiencing the same as you....

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Great and very positive message! You wrote this poem excellently and created good atmosphere. Flow is fantastic and you described emotions superbly. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by OHgreenman

    Very beautiful and peaceful write...I really enjoyed this stanza:

    Tears have run free
    Through many sleepless nights
    Agony has thrashed upon my soul
    Countless unhappy hours have passed me by
    And yet today, I am smiling
    I have no reason to cry
    Because his spirit is with me
    As I amble through each day

    His spirit will always be with you...and he does live on...inside of you.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent write ,wonderfully written and wording was simple yet powerful, you bring happiness to me in this poem, a pleasure to read and I myself call upon him each and everyday to sent me comfort to ease my pains, yet you did a marvelous job, keep it up please, your friend Tracy d......5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    Amazing poetry
    keep it up!