Whisper Away My Pain

by JaM   Aug 29, 2007


Please take away my pain
all my sorrow and tears.
Please take away this hate,
and this never ending fear.

My hurt is engraved deep,
into my soft supple heart.
For years I've suffered,
lying helpless in the dark.

I need you to be my angel,
and rescue me from hell.
I need you to be careful with the pieces,
from my broken heart that fell.

I need the comfort of your words,
whispered like sweet songs.
I need these horrible burdens,
to be forgotten; forever gone.

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  • 13 years ago

    by lokitaaXti

    - i relly enjoyed this poem .
    i can see that yu putt much thouqht and feelinq into itt , which makes itts evin better .

  • 16 years ago

    by TearStainedMess

    I like the feeling portrayed in this poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Oooh wow!!!! Beautifully well written..luv this one..the whole poem was emotional..enjoyable piece to read..good joB.
    -sarah

  • 16 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    This is BEAUITFUL and full of emotion and.... well emotion. I was I mean IS so strong... Keep writing. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by LovingAnnabelle

    Its a sad poem.. but i see you put much emotion into it.. and well its really good.. it was nicely written nice job 5/5

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