Dead but still living

by Hermosa   Aug 30, 2007


How much longer will I cry, how many more tears will i dry
When will my heart learn
how much more time will i mourn

Its been a year since you went with the Lord
I still cry everyday, I am still very torn

Our love was the greatest
we were trying to start a family
but a drunk driver killed you,
you were my honey

My family says to get over it, that enough time has passed
they say to make my life up again
dont they understand that it was made because of you
since yours was taken mine left with you

please comment and vote i would appreciate it.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Fanny

    Man...... did this really happen to you? message me to give me the answer ok? Wow, i was crushed when i read this. very sad but good choice of words and rhyming. keep writing girl.
    -Stephanie

  • 15 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    This was so sad
    and I am so sorry.
    But your emotions were beautifully expressed
    because its so
    true that when you lose a loved one
    you die with them in a way.
    The pain and hurt portrayed
    in this poem was so clear.
    Although it was really sad subject matter
    it was a brilliant poem!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    That was another very sad but wonderful poem ~_~ Death is hard and yes it feels like its almost impossible to move on but the one you loved would want you to go on and try to make a happy life ^_^ At least thats what I always had to tell myself to keep going =p You really are a talented writer =) 5/5
    Rhea

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaz

    Avery sad poem indeed.. very well expressed.. beautfully put together.. truth is.. this shows tht u gave up life.. in this poem. the character.. whos writing this.. just simply gives away life.. cheer up.. therz alot more to come.. u have alot more to write.. gr8 wrk..
    keep on writing

  • 16 years ago

    by Saori

    Really good poem. I loved it. I'm sorry of what happened to you. Crying helps sometimes.
    Hope you are doing better now.