Really deep poem..really good..it's not bad to cry...it's good to let things out. =]

amandaxx.

Deep poem.
good.
i liked it
<3 jess
4/5

Very sad. when will people learn NOT to drink and drive!!! it's really NOT that HARD!!! makes me angry!
anyways, it's a very nice poem. well done.

Really good poem. I loved it. I'm sorry of what happened to you. Crying helps sometimes.
Hope you are doing better now.

Avery sad poem indeed.. very well expressed.. beautfully put together.. truth is.. this shows tht u gave up life.. in this poem. the character.. whos writing this.. just simply gives away life.. cheer up.. therz alot more to come.. u have alot more to write.. gr8 wrk..
keep on writing

That was another very sad but wonderful poem ~_~ Death is hard and yes it feels like its almost impossible to move on but the one you loved would want you to go on and try to make a happy life ^_^ At least thats what I always had to tell myself to keep going =p You really are a talented writer =) 5/5
Rhea

This was so sad
and I am so sorry.
But your emotions were beautifully expressed
because its so
true that when you lose a loved one
you die with them in a way.
The pain and hurt portrayed
in this poem was so clear.
Although it was really sad subject matter
it was a brilliant poem!!

Man...... did this really happen to you? message me to give me the answer ok? Wow, i was crushed when i read this. very sad but good choice of words and rhyming. keep writing girl.
-Stephanie