Wow, I really liked this piece, It was written with such emotion, I really don't know what to say on this poem, I'm speechless, I loved it, It's like what I go through on my life...

Great Job.. It gets a 5/5

Sweet, just plain sweet. You and leaderman together kick rear! It was true in every way and I for one can relate. Both of you were right on track the entire time as if sharing a single mind. The ending had that shattering statement that I love in poems that bleed of frustration, a question not meant to be answered but speaking so much and so strongly. great a really great read. 5

This was a great poem and like always, you are giving out a lesson to the soicety, leasson of understanding each other...

only if we learn from it..
a 5/5 from me as you truly deserve it
you guys did a great job

Wow, this piece is very deep and meaningful, and I like it from the beginning to the end. It is greatly written with powerful message and amazing topic.
The ending is very effective.
My favorite stanza is:
-You think that you're normal?
I think that's absurd.
We live in a place
where it is a free world...-
All in all, this is great collab, well done, 5/5 from me.

Haha.. im sorry. i cant "help" like give advice on this.. bc your writting is so much more.. better? than mine.. but i thought this was outstanding.. it was so goos. lol. thats really all i have to say.. lol 5/5

Great!
I know what you mean by being told to be someone different that what you wanna be. It really sucks and you've showed it perfectly in this poem!
5/5

I loved it! And I know him! ^^ He's awsomeness! hehe full 5/5 from me chicky!

luv luv luv
Lizzi

Wonderful wording, Sherry nd Stephen. It was truly beautiful. Well DONE

It doesn't matter what other people think of you and your personality. If people dont love or like you for who you are then F**k them and the horse they rode in on. But if its you that dosn't like yourself then just change that about yourself. Stereotypes are overrated!

All i gotta say is WOW..