As I told you earlier.. I think this is just AWESOME! There is nothing in here that I would change.

You are so talented and your poetry just seems to draw me in. I am held captive from beginning to end and that is hard to do with the way my mind turns....

Great job babe...

--Sher

This is a well decriptive poem.
so powerful and so deep.
im still sticking to what i said on the last comment, you are a true poet.
wonderful job!