This is an alright poem not bad keep it up!

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This is a great poem, definately used good expressions. well done! ;)

I really loved ur poem....it has brought tears to my eyes...u knw i had these thoughts all which u have written in this poem i wanted to blurt out all these... like but i did'nt have tht talent which u have...and when i read ur poem it seemed very much familiar cuz tht wht i think all day i can relate it with ma life...i appreciate ur work..keep writing...

This poem is fantastic!! keep it up!!!!!

Fantastic! I loved it. It explains the truth that people don't see today, and describes what I think and feel. People cant see the truth, and when they do, its torture, and they want to end it.

Awwwwwww. really very touching meaning of your words written. i cannot say this is a poem. but its like something.. i loved the ending it was sad ending. and yes . faith is so important in any relation. aswell. try to converts your feelings and emotions in the form of poem.. i am sure you can do it.. just try next time