I love how it seems that one line is going to end, but is followed through in the next line. It just gives the impression that the poem forever flows. I've been waiting on you to post another poem and I am extremely content and pleased with this poem my dear talented one:)
Love you

Wow, this poem was powerful. great job!!!

This is amazing i liked the "long lost in my heart and mind
memories thought to have
been buried with the dead
rise up to haunt me in the night"part. u rock!! 5/5

Cory