I think this is outstanding you did an amazing job, its beautfiul.. 5/5 keep up the good work

I am blown away by the part
-The wonder of the future, the hurt of her past, and the pride of the present.-
It was awesome

Wow, Laura! This was so beauitful and simply amazing. I could feel the emotion pouring out of this piece as I read it. Story writing would definitely be a good path for you to take. Don't stop! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

OMG...
this entry almost made me cry...
u are so good...
keep it up...

XOXOXO
Britt

Hmm .. its a very intense description.. but there is a simplicity at the core of it.. because what ur describing is something we all experience.. the emotional , mental displacement which can be caused when we hear a piece of music.. which gets u thinking.. and so does ur poem.. good work. keep them coming :)

That was simply amazing. and i loved it. very descriptive and i love your choice of words. even though this wasn't a poem it had a nice flow to it, you know. and this was an attention grabber from start to finish. and i especially liked that first paragraph. amazing write. 5/5.

I love this poem even though it depressed me a little cause that use to me about two years ago and it makes me wonder if im still that same person or not but its a great poem i loved it...=)

I love this poem even though it depressed me a little cause that use to me about two years ago and it makes me wonder if im still that same person or not but its a great poem i loved it...=)

I am once again at a loss for words to discribe your writting skills. I like your style.

WOW you should totally write a book or something this is great work and i give it a ten lol. check out my poems and comment

I luv dis poem makin it a fav

Love your choice of wording and imagery, excellent write.