Wow very sad and short but very deep and fll of meaning i liked it alot this peice really made you feel the sorrow.
5/5
laura

This was beautifully written, emotional and powerful. It flowed well and was heartbreakingly sad.
love Tara-Kay
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Short and great. I love how you used the word "snuggle" and made it work in a sad poem like this. :) I didn't think it was possible. I liked it. 5/5

~Kat~

Perfect rhyme intresing ooem .
I wonder what you meant with.....
"You snuggle in tarnished dreams".

Short poem but interesting.

I loved this, I think by saying 'you' throughout the poem instead of referring to yourself the whole time helps the reader relate to it but still keeps it personal to you as if you were talking about yourself in third person and I like that. The imagery and wording was great as well. Usually poems with such short lines need a little more descriptions, but in this case, it doesn`t.

5.5
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It was so sad, i loved it, the way you expressed it was amazing. the words you use and the image they bring to my mind. it was perfect. great write 5/5

Deff, made me feel .. empty; in a way.
This poem was one of the best I've read..
in about a month, so be honored.
You did wonders with this one. :]
Overall Rating: 5.0/5

Oh wow. do let me know what your intentions are behind your poem. when i read it, it seems like your talking to those who write the emo cliche poems.

good poem though.

Very nice write, I like the flow and the subject, it feels like it should continue on though, like there is more to be said. Nice work.

Wow, this was a greatly written great poem, i liked your word choices, they were great.

beside you had great emotion throughout the poem

a 5/5 from me as you truly deserve it

Great description, that first captured my attention.. and with that description and wording u had putted the right ambiance/ setting in the poem, which is sadness.. and u have successfully ended in the poem. In short it was a flawless and beautiful poem. keep it up

Bang bang!!
your words are beautiful..and thats really a talent..
keep it up!!

I like the flow of this poem. Your word usage and since of direction is magnificiant.

The pain you write about it heartbreaking and allows the reader to embrace you.

--Sher

Loved it, absolutely breathtaking! 5 / 5 !

I love sad poems that show, in detail, the human ordeal of loss, either of love, one's self, a possitive out-look; or, of gaining the pressures of life and the world. It shows to me that I am not alone in my confused feelings of life, and it really entrances me when it is written as well as it is in this poem. I thought this poem was a fantastic dark piece, which is enjoyable and allows me to connect my sadness with your words.

This was an awesome read.

~Richhie

Excellent rhymes and perfect word choice. I really loved the poem and 5/5 is all what I can give for your work

I love this!! Especially the last stanza.. Brilliantly worded!!

5.5**
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BEAUTIFUL! the words, the flow of the whole thing...BEAUTIFUL! i absolutly...LOVE this!

This poem was very well written and it flowed really nicely, too. I think you did a really great job on writing it. You expressed yourself very well. 5/5

~Kristina

The rhyme and flow in this piece was wonderful. A very pleasant read, although the context is dark. 5/5

marcella