Because You Loved Me

by Deana   Sep 2, 2007


Because You Loved Me

My spirit soared upon the wind
My dreams returned so sweet again
A rose felt soft, the birds flew free
All this and more, because you loved me

A heart once broken begins to heal
An empty soul begins to feel
Eyes once misty begin to see
A new voice sings, because you loved me

Fairies dance in fantasy
Upon the shores of an emerald sea
Passions fire fulfilled in dreams
Sensual longings, because you loved me

An aching heart no longer seeks
Empty arms no longer reach
My mind ,my heart , my soul agree
I am at peace, because you loved me

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  • 5 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    This is a very good poem, filled with love , something i enjoy reading, you did a great job , keep it up , TDR 5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by Boy

    Awww. i wish this happen with me... a good form of love story... 5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    WwwawWw..such an amazing peace let me tell u that ! Very powerful and sweet.
    SO ffull of all the gifts real love gives us when
    its true
    he harmony
    the peace
    the happiness...the strength..the confidence..the aims for 2morrow..
    and u did talk about all these...

    My spirit soared upon the wind
    My dreams returned so sweet again
    A rose felt soft, the birds flew free
    All this and more, because you loved me
    >>i mean how how happiness is stated here through ur words ...and ur imaginative mind...how happiness filled everything around u...so obvious ur concept..well done !

    A heart once broken begins to heal
    An empty soul begins to feel
    Eyes once misty begin to see
    >> yes love give us strength again..makes us forget our pains...give us hope for morrow
    and helps us to move ahead and feel better through bitter !
    well done again

    Fairies dance in fantasy
    Upon the shores of an emerald sea
    Passions fire fulfilled in dreams
    Sensual longings, because you loved me
    >>> i feel joy...i feel peace here and i feel so much
    passion and calmness...so sweet

    My mind ,my heart , my soul agree
    I am at peace, because you loved me
    >> what an ending u like just summed all ha above lines in how this had made feel... im so impressed..ur thoughts about love..so close to mine..i love ur work
    ur so talented
    keep it up ! 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Awww... this is such a beautiful poem! I love it... Great jooobbb!! :)

  • 8 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    Again just beautiful, wow that left me speechless. I usually dont like love peoms but this really touched me, there was so much emotion and gave a wonderful feeling and mental image.. lovely 5/5

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