Comments : Because You Loved Me

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Deana
    Beautiful piece. Stuning imagery.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by Todd

    I just thought I would tell you that it is very rare I read anything so happy as this on this site. I like hopeful things. I guess I understand that there is a place for tragedy, but it's so real and often that I much rather read a rarity like this.

    This is beautiful.

  • 9 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Perfect verses of love ....love the ending lines...

    An aching heart no longer seeks
    Empty arms no longer reach
    My mind ,my heart , my soul agree
    I am at peace, because you loved me

    ^ tht's it exactly! peace....found in that one special person....

  • 9 years ago

    by tAsTeSlIkEsKiTtLeZ

    Ohmygosh, that was so good I like looked back to make sure i was reading it right that is an absolutely great poem!!!!!

    From the 11 year old poet XD

    Panic x

  • 9 years ago

    by Chris Black

    Thanks for commenting mine.

    i love this one
    you're a good poet =]

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    An aching heart no longer seeks
    Empty arms no longer reach
    My mind ,my heart , my soul agree
    I am at peace, because you loved me

    Deana,

    This is my favorite stanza.
    Your poem describes very well how the love of a man can turn your whole life around. A very beautiful tribute to love!

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 9 years ago

    by David

    Whoa gosh, now this was a great poem, so much love and affection. you have an unreal amount of talent! bravo!

    5/5 David

  • 9 years ago

    by hadia

    Wow.. amazing.
    i love the way you use your words.

    i dont know why, but this verse is my fav:
    "An aching heart no longer seeks
    Empty arms no longer reach"

    well.. great poem!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Alexa Eudis

    This is the essence of deep, amazing poetry. nice job!

  • 9 years ago

    by Sarah

    WOw. THis is beautiful. Wonderfully written. It was truly deep and a poem from the heart. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Bugg

    Aw! How wonderful is it to be loved? Well, just read this poem and find out! lol It was so good! I loved it. It was beautiful.

  • 9 years ago

    by HvN

    Love truly is an amazing thing and this poem says it all :] 5/5 great job!

  • 9 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    The title reminded me of the song ceilin deon sang!

    nice poem!5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by JR13

    DAMN THIS POEM IS SOMETHING ELSE I GUESS U CAN SAY I UNDERSTAND WHERE YOU COMING FROM I GOTTA GIVE THIS A 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    Beautiful poem. :) I loved it! You did an outstanding job. 5/5

    Bri~

  • 9 years ago

    by Jessie

    Incredible, its awesome it has so much illusion!! you should check out some of mine:).... i gave this a five out of five

  • Beautifully penned, breathtakingly amazing piece. I tried to pick a favorite part but I figured out that I love the whole poem.

    Thank you for sharing this.

  • 8 years ago

    by Rodney Kirby

    I thought, it was beautiufull, very sweet. if you would read and comment on a few of mine, i would love it i will read more of yours.

  • 8 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Exquisite!!!!

  • 8 years ago

    by anand singh

    A beautiful and heartfelt piece superbly penned.
    An enjoyable read.
    Paul...