Comments : Twinkle (haiku)

  • 16 years ago

    by Kat

    Beautiful.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Gem
    Beautiful Haiku :)
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    Another beautiful poem written by you Gem.It's just so beautifully done.
    Take care <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is beautiful...the imagery here was fantastic, and you managed to create so much beauty in such a short form.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    This is very beautiful, I really enjoy in it, it could be a longer, I think I know that this is Haiku but you chose excellent topic and I am sorry because it isn't longer... Anyway I like it, every line is so effective. Well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelly

    I love this poem. I love stars i can sit watching them for ever:) I love them so much i got them tattood on my wrist (just 4 little ones) but i think this is a beautuful little poem to them. I just love it, its effective:)

    Kelly
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Patience

    Loved it! Isn't it crazy how much of an impact so little words can make?

  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I really liked this, such power in so few words, it amazes me how well you can leave such an impact on me after I read your work :]

    5.5
    :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    You can really write a great haiku. In three little lines, you give as much to the reader as if they read a paragraph. It really was quite beautiful and I liked the topic.
    5/5

    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Pretty perfect id say. I cant really flaw Hiakus because im not expert. I like them though, nice :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    Another great Haiku. Very romantic and hopeful. Again an enjoyable read.

  • 15 years ago

    by Teria

    Know what I loved about this poem? The first line. Two words = five syllables. I really liked the idea of that.

    I love (most) haikus for the simple fact that they're short yet sweet. Some are relaxing and some joyful... but some are horrid as well. You have a very nice haiku here. I don't think I'd put it under relaxing OR joyful, rather refreshing. It gives a glimpse of hope.