Pictureframes..

by Wake   Sep 4, 2007


The last time i was with you
you were cold and out of breath.
Depressed and coffeed out,
empty cases of cigarettes.

Put a blanket around you
and warmed you up instead.
Waved the smoked out of the room
put you back in bed.

Every time you were torn apart,
i sewed you up thread by thread.
You broke down and i picked you up
whenever you drowned yourself in regret.

I hope you'll remember me
when you're looking through the picture frames.
They say, photographs never change,
and people never stay the same.

But I'll always be this way
wised by all of my mistakes.
The photographs may soon get old,
but i wont fade away..

and i hope you'll come back someday
when you're lonely and feeling gray
I'd still be standing on these docks,
just waiting to sail away...

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  • 15 years ago

    by Aveena

    Wow this is really good..
    it shows what being a friend really means.
    this just left me speechless..
    good job. keep it up..

    Aveena*-

  • 16 years ago

    by Katelyn

    Uhh, it brought back a lot of memories 2 me that were a little heart wrenching but it's okay cuz i'm a little glad, it kinda let me realize i was a good friend. ur a great writer, and u should really never stop no matter how old or young u r. luved it.

    .:Katelyn:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    This gave me goosebumps. It was so deep and personal and like.... This is my favorite piece b/c the words melted together like butter so perfectly!

    Every time you were torn apart,
    i sewed you up thread by thread.
    You broke down and i picked you up
    whenever you drowned yourself in regret.

    Dont ever stop writing. I'm stunned by your work. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by MorbidCupcake

    It made me remember....him.....
    It hurt but it made me happy at the same time
    I liked it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tru

    Well done. The level of feeling in the poem is enough to make you cry. Keep it up. 5/5

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