Comments : Oh my angel (Shape)

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    I have never seen this type of poem before but i think it was exellent. I love also how you could use language to work with you on this poem nice job xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Tammie

    Oh this is a lovely write. Beautifully penned, with true emotion. I saw the shape also, that must have been a bit difficult to do, but you did it justice. A very heartfelt poem I enjoyed reading. :]

    5/5
    Tammie

  • 16 years ago

    by DeadandBleeding

    This is so beautiful. I love the shape too. I love the flow of this pieces, it suits so well.
    Well Done
    DnB

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    It makes an angle
    right?
    any way good poem
    love the vidual words
    great description
    keep up the good work

  • I really loved this poem. It showed a lot of emotion. I really loved it. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    This is a good poem a bit more mushy then I would deal with but none the less a good write good job Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by unknown

    Amazing..! I can't imagine how u made that poem,, it has perfect shapes in every detail,,,
    And the words,, it didn't look that u forced them to be that shape.. next time, would you teach me..?? ^^
    the best poem i've ever read..
    6/5 ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    This is a great write and the shape made it even better. What i think is that you should space the poem here so readers will see the shape already without copy/paste. Still, overall a wonderful job. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Beautiful piece filled with wonderful emotion. It all flowed just flawlessly and overall it was a joy to read. Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Wow.. awesome, I put it in Word, it's an angel! ..(unnecessary thing to say, you know it yourself, but I was really surprised)
    That's beautiful done, very unique, never saw that before.
    Sweet words,
    End was great
    Loved reading it
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara

    Awee....very cute, very nice idea adding the shap into it and it was wonderful to read---much luck---tara

  • 15 years ago

    by khobo

    Really nice. It was simple and straight to the point. I like the structure of your poem (and I checked out the shape as well.. =) clever). I liked how it got shorter as the poem approached the end. It's as if it was fading to an end. Just one thing though, I don't think you needed to make it rhyme. I think it would've been even stronger without some of the rhymes. Nice work.