Infernal

by the come back   Sep 4, 2007


From the first time I wrote a poem
No one said that I have a home
A family that cares for me,
And a family that loves me

When the times I'm weak,
And dont know how to speak
I grabbed my note,
then I wrote

So here I am,
Waiting for someone
Here in the dark,
With my broken heart

Wishing to die,
Dont know how to cry
Wishing to be loved,
But no one wants my love

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    This is so sad and deep. Overall, it's definitely the making of an excellent poem! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    Very nice,m i like the note part.

    your servant:
    atticus

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    You really sound honest but rhyming seems little forced. Emotions are expressed on a good way but I don't like the last line and first stanza. Rest of it is great, keep up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    This poem is so cute and mournful. It is honest and there is no flow problems in it. 5/5 all the way

    tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Now that i loved, it was very saddening though. but it was a strong poem, such great imagery. the way it was expressed was beautiful. well done

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