Comments : You're like

  • 16 years ago

    by enigmatic_prey

    Wow!!!!!..it's nice that you are in mood write now to write poems.......unlike me....*cries*.....but anyway..great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Very beautiful and emotional. I like the descriptions in the whole piece.
    My favorite stanza is:
    -You're like candy,
    That sweetens my day
    You're like movie,
    That I watch everyday-

    The last two lines in the last stanza are a little bit confusing, but the rest of the poem is very good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    You made my day.....you made me into better thoughts by providing lovely writings...

    luz and naz

  • 16 years ago

    by amandalynn

    Really good. 5/5 =]]

    amandaxx.

  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    A well written piece there were a couple of sentences such as "You're like movie" could be "Your like a movie" and so on but except for this it was a good piece.

  • 16 years ago

    by broken reflection

    Woah, that was a really well flowing fantabulous poem keep it up 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    Wow...I really loved this one =) Very sweet, heart felt and loving but it also shows some of the other sides to love in a beautiful way =) A perfect 5 in every way =D
    Rhea

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Ok.. my brain is working on this, yeah u made it really different from the usual poem coz of the desciption. but honestly it doesn't caught my interest on this.. though i know it's so sweet and kindda unique (due to the good imagintaion and description or wordings ) maybe because i don't like reading such style (repition) i mean it sounds like a cliche to me... hope that doesn't offend u

  • 16 years ago

    by amoxi

    Again the rhyming was a little off you could have found another word that rhymed with day like they,say,may,okay,lay etc. but still another good poem

  • 16 years ago

    by enigmatic_prey

    I mean right now to write

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    A good poem, i liked the idea of comparing the person to different things, it worked well, the flow was okay and you did a good job
    with love, Tara-Kay
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    It was wonderfully written. you can see that this piece cam straight from your heart, i think a lot of people could relate to this 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Unique poem and I enjoyed reading your poem. It sounds good and the word choice can still be improved I would say and you have the caliber:-)

    tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by azii

    Aww.. This poem is absolutely fantastic! I love it. Great job! 5/5 I added it to my fav poems :) I just can't find the right words to describe what I think about this poem it's so amazing. Seriously! Keep up the wonderful job!

    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Woe

    This is cute & sweet. i like it. <3 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    I like the food talk, but seriously, nice format, good job

    your servant:
    atticus

  • 16 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    I thought this piece was really cute and some of the comparisons I found quite amusing. Interesting and different take on the whole relationship genre.

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    The first stanza has the words [[one ending in day]] as a rhyme. I didn't like that too well.

    "You're like an onion,
    That makes me cry"
    ^^ I thought those two lines were adorable.

    And, overall this entire poem was adorable. I actually loved it. Lol. It's quite good. (:

    Keep it up darling.

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    Good poem
    5/5
    well done bro
    keep writing