Comments : Envisioned Security

  • 10 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I'm going to nominate this piece for the weekly contest, it really just blew me away. The emotion portrayed were so deep and truely touched my heart with my own thoughts. It made me think while capturing my soul. I can't express how much I truely enjoyed reading this piece one of the best i've read in awhile. I usually don't say this alot but wow. You have left me pretty much speechless. Well done on creating such an amazingly beautiful poem. Keep on writing you have talent. ~Mel

  • 10 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    Again I think you have a very interesting flow, very nice, I have enjoyed reading your work and think I will be adding you to my faves. Good job!

  • 10 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Wow. i really dont know what to say about this. your wording is fabulous. i want to add this to my favorites. ill even give you a cookie. [voted and rated the best]

  • 10 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Ok, maybe next week. dont forget to remind me. i really want to vote on this but ive sadly reached my limit...

  • 10 years ago

    by Shauna

    Another Wonderful Poem! You Are a Talented Writer! =)

    5.5**
    <33

  • 10 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Wow. I have to say that truly stunned me. Truly. It's wonderful Richie (lol). You've left me stunned, which is hard to do. To me, this poem speaks of how as a child, you are a lot more secure with yourself, but as you get older, insecurites creep in to you and make you doubt yourself a whole lot more than when you did when you were little. This is awesome 5/5 from me for sure

    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.