Painful End

by Sandra D   Sep 6, 2007


One last time
Is all I need,
To slit my wrist
And watch it bleed.

One last time
To think about
If I'll be missed,
Or go without.

One last time
To call for you
But I'll resist,
And you will, too.

One last time
You'll hear my cries.
While they persist,
You'll think of the lies.

One last time,
You'll hear my breath,
As you assist
In this everlasting death.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Paralyzed

    Your flow was on in this one until I hit the last 2 stanzas. It goes better if you take "the" out of the last line of the 4th stanza and for me the last line of the last stanza has too many syllables. Otherwise I like the poem and the dark feeling behind it, you did a nice job. Good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Such a sad poem....very deep and heartfelt...it pours with emotion...awesome work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    I love the abcb,dece rhyming it is really uniquie (SP) it sounds like a really difficult scheme. Great jod:~)Sam

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    Very dark, very emotional piece...very vivid image shines through your words, great work on this, keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    Great poem though the flow at the end threw me off a bit. Other than that I thought it was a great piece of work, it almost feels like there should be more to it.

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