You + Me

by amoxi   Sep 6, 2007


Before I met you my life was bad
You have me feelings that I've never had
I was in a bad place back then
You made me feel like i was home again

I never loved before i met you
But you've given me a love that i never knew
When i first saw you i knew you were different
But now that i know you it all makes sense

You've improved my life so much
And I'm reminded every time we touch
I love how you take care of me
But there's so much that you don't see

I'm hurting real bad inside
Things i know that I've tried to hide
I tell you everything for i want you to know
But my feelings, they are so hard to show

I really want you to love me
And i want us to forever be
You've given me more than I've ever had
But all i do is make you sad

I do all i can to make things right
But all we seem to do is fight
Everything i do, i do for you
So our love can really be true

You've given me so much hope
But with my past i still have to cope
You've given me more than i can ask for
And my love for you grows more and more

Everything you say and do
Let's me in on something new
I was sheltered when i was young
But with you a new life as begun

To me you mean everything
Without you i wouldn't be the same
I love you with all my heart
And i pray that nothing tears us apart

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Excellent rhymes and great flow. Loved this piece my dear. Its very very poetic and lexically strong :)

    Tc 5/5
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Your words are simple but it describe your emotions well..and that good..i enjoyed it very much..some parts rhyme so well..5/5 for it

  • 16 years ago

    by the come back

    Too long but i enjoy reading you're poem....nice poem and topic.......5/5 ^_^

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